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PostPosted: Wed Aug 07, 2013 2:20 am 
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So after having read a crazy ridiculous amount of Naruto fanfiction, I haven't been able to find a story like the one I've had in mind for a while now. I finally decided to try to write the story in my head, and this is what it came out to be so far.
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/9571005/1/T ... eft-Behind
I only have one chapter at like 3k words right now, so it's kinda wimpy, but that chapter pretty much says how the story will run (minus, of course, the infinite amount of complications that I could throw into the mix). I would like to get some feedback on it, because I kinda doubt I'll end up pulling any reviews from what I posted.
Basically, do you guys think what I have outlined is good enough to be worth trying to finish?

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It was really interesting I have to say. I always wanted to see Naruto going back to his roots since there wasn't much to say about his mother's lineage and the Uzumaki Clan.

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